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russcook
November 08, 2015
Hi Marco
I think that photographically, composition-wise, and setting-wise this is an artistically and technically nicely produced image. I have just one suggestion/comment and it's to do with the pose and dramatics. My thoughts are that the model in blue is well positioned, has the right tilt of her head, and the perfect facial expression (all faultless). The model in pink is also well positioned and looks great. However (and this may seem a small thing) I suggest that moving her head and lips closer to the other model's ear (even just slightly) would add emphasis the appearance of whispering. I think that the whispering model is also just slightly too rigid and therefore looks a little more posed and a little disconnected from the other model. These are simply my impressions and honest feedback. Overall, its a fantastic image and very nicely done. My suggestions are more within the area of dramatics and the theatrical. The shot is staged beautifully with nice use of props, costume, setting and lighting.
I think that photographically, composition-wise, and setting-wise this is an artistically and technically nicely produced image. I have just one suggestion/comment and it's to do with the pose and dramatics. My thoughts are that the model in blue is well positioned, has the right tilt of her head, and the perfect facial expression (all faultless). The model in pink is also well positioned and looks great. However (and this may seem a small thing) I suggest that moving her head and lips closer to the other model's ear (even just slightly) would add emphasis the appearance of whispering. I think that the whispering model is also just slightly too rigid and therefore looks a little more posed and a little disconnected from the other model. These are simply my impressions and honest feedback. Overall, its a fantastic image and very nicely done. My suggestions are more within the area of dramatics and the theatrical. The shot is staged beautifully with nice use of props, costume, setting and lighting.
FulvioChiari
December 10, 2015
love lighting and colors. The compo is perfect. Maybe a more pronunced whispering act from the left model can be a little improovement in an outstanding photo!
Great!
Great!
FulvioChiari
December 10, 2015
No, i correct myself. Is perfect as is. I look again and again and it seems to me that the left says within closed lips: "Don't look at me, but, look there.. there is/are..."
Perfect!!!
Perfect!!!
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