Floating at dock at high tide
On the Bay of Fundy, Nova Scotia, Canada
On the Bay of Fundy, Nova Scotia, Canada
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DaveKochPhoto
February 28, 2017
Hi Vernpich!
I decided to pop over and look at your pictures! I thought I would critique this one.
First, I love the color of the boats. Very interesting to me. I look on that other side, and I see bright orange and yellow to- floats? Me- and I only speak for me!- I like color. I prolly would have headed over there and shot. I like to be right IN what I am shooting. To me, this framing is too far away. Also, the railing takes your eyes OUT of the frame, not into it.
I oprolly would have also JUST shot the bridge... in seperate shots. You might be trying to tell too many stories here. Tell one at a time. Start small, or big. ELiminate the scruff.
Is this local to you? If so, go back and shoot the boats. One at a time. With the floats. Mess around over there... post and let me know! I would like to see what you do!
I decided to pop over and look at your pictures! I thought I would critique this one.
First, I love the color of the boats. Very interesting to me. I look on that other side, and I see bright orange and yellow to- floats? Me- and I only speak for me!- I like color. I prolly would have headed over there and shot. I like to be right IN what I am shooting. To me, this framing is too far away. Also, the railing takes your eyes OUT of the frame, not into it.
I oprolly would have also JUST shot the bridge... in seperate shots. You might be trying to tell too many stories here. Tell one at a time. Start small, or big. ELiminate the scruff.
Is this local to you? If so, go back and shoot the boats. One at a time. With the floats. Mess around over there... post and let me know! I would like to see what you do!
DaveKochPhoto
February 28, 2017
Hi Vernpich!
I decided to pop over and look at your pictures! I thought I would critique this one.
First, I love the color of the boats. Very interesting to me. I look on that other side, and I see bright orange and yellow to- floats? Me- and I only speak for me!- I like color. I prolly would have headed over there and shot. I like to be right IN what I am shooting. To me, this framing is too far away. Also, the railing takes your eyes OUT of the frame, not into it.
I oprolly would have also JUST shot the bridge... in seperate shots. You might be trying to tell too many stories here. Tell one at a time. Start small, or big. ELiminate the scruff.
Is this local to you? If so, go back and shoot the boats. One at a time. With the floats. Mess around over there... post and let me know! I would like to see what you do!
I decided to pop over and look at your pictures! I thought I would critique this one.
First, I love the color of the boats. Very interesting to me. I look on that other side, and I see bright orange and yellow to- floats? Me- and I only speak for me!- I like color. I prolly would have headed over there and shot. I like to be right IN what I am shooting. To me, this framing is too far away. Also, the railing takes your eyes OUT of the frame, not into it.
I oprolly would have also JUST shot the bridge... in seperate shots. You might be trying to tell too many stories here. Tell one at a time. Start small, or big. ELiminate the scruff.
Is this local to you? If so, go back and shoot the boats. One at a time. With the floats. Mess around over there... post and let me know! I would like to see what you do!
DaveKochPhoto
February 28, 2017
PS Sorry for the double post. I think Viewbug is screwed up cuz I only posted ONCE! They ahve been having problems ALL DAY!
DaveKochPhoto
February 28, 2017
PS Sorry for the double post. I think Viewbug is screwed up cuz I only posted ONCE! They ahve been having problems ALL DAY!
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