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johnmdavies
September 06, 2015
St wong as you have asked for a Critique i would have to say much too dark for me and that is in this format with a backlit screen it good to see you are experimenting trying to be different however in this image I would just like to see a bit more of the muscles tones like you have in the outstretched leg but it is lost elsewhere. Good idea and experiment with light
HectorRivera
September 08, 2015
Nice concept but need more illumination. You could use some highlighting and rim lights to create separation and contrast
EyeoftheLens
September 11, 2015
I also love your "eye" and composition. I agree with JohnmDavies, below, though. This series of photos is too underexposed. If you don't want to increase the exposure too much, experiment with a combination of slightly increasing the shadows and the highlights.
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