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cevert
November 30, 2015
This is a really great image!! I love it. Congrats on being a finalist in coexist! :D
ronalbers
December 17, 2015
Hi Briana,capturing a moving object is not easy so well done. I do however have some points. Why the iso 500? You've used a shutter speed of 1/4000 so there is no need for that iso. The clarity of image would benefit somewhat. The shallow depth of field is well chosen, it draws the attention to the subject and it nice blurrs the background. I do have 2 points of critique. First I would have liked the subject more to the left of the composition. The part on the left is now a lot of empty space not adding to the image. It also would help me "read" the photograph better looking from left to right. It would also make me wonder more who the boy is running to. You know what I mean? My second point is that in post production I would like you to add a little more "punch" to the photograph. The colors the way they are now are a little bit washed out.
Hopefully you will appreciate my critique.
Have a nice day and keep ip the photography!
regards, Ron
Hopefully you will appreciate my critique.
Have a nice day and keep ip the photography!
regards, Ron
brianafillers
December 19, 2015
Hey, Ron! Your critique is very helpful, and I really appreciate you taking the time to critique this image!
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